@savannah_grace2009
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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 49 minutes ago
Thx
🧐 I need more convincing of your self-confidence. 🥳🤩🎉
I hope you enjoyed reading the stories. I also hope my dumping on you of information in this post didn’t bore you.
Nope, does not bore me! The reason I asked those questions was because the answers were not evident in the story, so now you know. Of course it’s up to you what i…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 52 minutes ago
Like Whaley, I’m curious! I don’t fully understand your beliefs regarding the Spirit.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 54 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore
Sixth story (Note: I did post parts of this one in The Snowball Fight. To all those who read those parts, they have been slightly altered since then, but not by much, so feel free to skip those pieces)
fyi, it might take me a couple days to post the next story after this.
What Kind of Love is…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 hour, 4 minutes ago
Oh, I see, so it can happen whenever. That makes sense, since a ceremony wouldn’t trigger something like that.
comes when the Holy Spirit fully comes into someone’s life
This is where I’ve not understood this before. 😅 Do you believe those spiritual gifts are necessary if you are going to fully take in the Holy Spirit? Does that mean you c…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 hour, 11 minutes ago
I’m glad
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 hour, 13 minutes ago
Yayy I read them!! Congrats in the new project and the progress. :-p
Thx
Is this futuristic or not? Sometimes I felt like it was, but sometimes the setting felt older (like in story four).
No. Baron’s story is set in the Middle Ages (MA) of Wond. Note: what we consider the Middle Ages isn’t what the Wondians would call the Middle…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 hour, 31 minutes ago
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @theducktator @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @grcr @esther-c @ellette-giselle @rae @anyone-else-lol
Riker Art (done today…and I’m so glad I stuck with it, because I love it so much😭)
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 hour, 40 minutes ago
Ah, Malan sounds better XD
I assume you mean characters like Thom it the recruitment officer at the beginning?
Yeah, minor characters he converses with. Although sometimes you pull it off quite well, other times it’s not so good.
Hmm. I might include some more in the final version. I’ll see what people think when I share book I…
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freedom posted an update 1 hour, 47 minutes ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
Who’s ready for Monday??? 😭✨
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freedom replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 hour, 51 minutes ago
(and before anyone asks, yes, I believe that speaking in tongues, miracles, prophecy, etc are for us today just as much as they were for the disciples and the beginning of the church)
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freedom replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 hour, 52 minutes ago
How do I put this??? 🤔😅
We believe that the Holy Spirit, of course, comes into someone when they accept Christ, but Baptism by Fire (or the Baptism of the Holy Spirit), for my church, comes when the Holy Spirit fully comes into someone’s life, and often also involves the showing of spiritual gifts such as speaking in tongues, the…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 53 minutes ago
@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @whalekeeper
Why?
I entered Baron into this RP to work out his character, get used to him since he was very new to me at the time. I also thought he’d be entertaining to you guys since you had never heard of him before and I didn’t reveal his backstory, leaving him a mysterious character. Now I have him mostly…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 17 minutes ago
I should say thank you to you for providing reasons to keep it as well and reminding me that I can’t please everyone. One of my struggles is that I always try to, but deep down I know I can’t.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 21 minutes ago
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 23 minutes ago
*plays how to train your dragon theme song*
:]
By the way, did you read what I decided to do with my magic system? You were the one who was encouraging me to keep it the way it was the most. While I have made my choice and am going to stick with it, I am curious to see what you think.
I wanted to support that version of your…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 28 minutes ago
*plays how to train your dragon theme song*
By the way, did you read what I decided to do with my magic system? You were the one who was encouraging me to keep it the way it was the most. While I have made my choice and am going to stick with it, I am curious to see what you think.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 31 minutes ago
@linus-smallprint Well, technically, I wasn’t really shipping them that hard, but I did notice that they could be a couple and assumed it was intentional.
Honestly, it’s actually better this way, that you didn’t plan to have romance. That meant it came up naturally due to your character’s’ personalities and isn’t shoehorned into the plot. Y…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 31 minutes ago
Sorry, it struck me and I feel like it would be super cool to turn the timid love interest girl into a dragon-rider.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 32 minutes ago
👍
OH OH OH I have an idea. Martha is always described as super timid, but she should have a dragon for a steed by the end of the series. That was her first fun interaction with Alan, talking about dragons.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 34 minutes ago
(You can do whatever you want with them, to be clear. :p)
I know. But I think they would end up together, so I think I will let it happen. Sometimes it’s just interesting to watch your characters do their own thing.
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